使用了 "lies in" 结构，生动地表达了事物存在的本质或核心所在。
While ensuring my studies remain my priority, I have actively participated in various part-time jobs on and off campus, serving as an information officer, interviewer, and etiquette assistant. Currently, I am working part-time at a McDonald's near the campus. Although the income is modest, it helps alleviate my family's financial burden and allows me to gain practical knowledge beyond textbooks, further strengthening my resolve. Financial hardship is only temporary, and past academic results are in the past; The true test of my confidence and courage lies in the path I choose ahead. I am committed to using my passion and perseverance to create a brilliant future. Given my family's financial circumstances and my overall performance during the past year, I believe I meet the eligibility criteria for the National Inspirational Scholarship and the National Financial Aid. Therefore, I am formally submitting this application.
I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the faculty and teachers for their dedicated training, and to my classmates for their support in both my studies and life. Moving forward, I will hold myself to even higher standards to achieve better results.
This is a summary of my current situation. I kindly request the leaders and teachers to review and approve my application.
Sincerely,
在保证学习的前提下，我积极参加各类勤工俭学实践，曾担任过信息员、访问员和礼仪人员。目前，我正在学校附近的麦当劳从事兼职工作。虽然收入微薄，但能在一定程度上减轻家庭的经济压力，并让我学到许多书本之外的实践知识，这让我更加坚定了人生信念。家庭的困难是暂时的，过往的成绩已成过去，未来的道路才是对勇气与自信的真正考验。我将用青春的激情与毅力，去创造更加灿烂的明天。鉴于家庭经济情况以及我在校期间的综合表现，我认为自己符合国家励志奖学金与国家助学金的申请条件，特此提出申请。
在此，我要特别感谢系领导和老师们的悉心培养，感谢老师们在专业领域的指导以及同学们在学习和生活中的支持。今后，我会更加严格地要求自己，争取取得更好的成绩。
以上是我的基本情况，恳请各位领导、老师审核批准。
此致
敬礼！